Draft Prologue... Advice and Opinions?!?

I really like it, it is very interesting, please keep on writing ok? I really loved it! You wrote everything very nicely. Just one part during the story I sometimes got confused to who was speaking, but since you said that you'd add more character descriptions then it's fine :) Hope you keep on writing! Also please let me email you for mine, I also need someone's constructive criticism, please?